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I attended a beheading today,
They thought I was more than a spectacle;
They see my horror, thinking this a play,
My illusion was more than optical.

Faces in the crowd have all but sorrow,
This hood trapping my vision, all for naught;
These creaking planks, the stench of the gallow,
It's no wonder what some people have sought.

In the midst of sundown, hung upside down,
The hood falls, I send a prayer to the sky;
Then my hope rushes in, bearing a crown,
Clad in bravery, my only ally.

Yet the axe breaks flesh, making me limp meat.
The crowds applause, my saviour incomplete.
©2008-2009 ~virenity
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*sigh* I'm lacking ideas.

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:icondreshanda:
Idea: RAVEN!!!!! XDD

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The living billboard is asking you to check out the link! It's not bad! Honest!
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:iconsaskuto:
This is genius!

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:iconvirenity:
O rly? 8B I dunno how much I like it. I guess it's pretty good.
:iconsaskuto:
there u go with that modesty thing again ;)

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:iconvirenity:
Perhaps I'm "modest" cause I still see so many areas to improve. XD
:iconsaskuto:
awwww.... yeah, that could be it ^^

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:icondarkelvenmage:
*fuckin claps*

I have run out of ways to say "this is good!" and such, so...

*fuckin claps*
:iconvirenity:
I'm constantly pleased by comments like these, but I'm starting to wonder what I consider good/great/awesome. Cause I never feel like I reach it.
:icondarkelvenmage:
You're just moody and hard on yourself, as all writers should be. If you LIKED your writing, you would be a disgrace to the profession.

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